Letter Bee 11

Dialogue: 0,0:00:00.00,0:00:00.00,Main Dialog,,0000,0000,0000,,{note, this poem is in the beginning of every manga volume. It's like a combination of "one ring to rule them all" and Psalm 23 + the Lord's prayer...}
Dialogue: 0,0:00:00.00,0:00:00.00,Main Dialog,,0000,0000,0000,,{I'd read the first few verses of the King James Version Genesis, since this is verse one, and match that tone -- archaic, authorative, but not convoluted.} {I cannot decide on the best way to translate this at this juncture... I need to think upon it, so I've typed up many possibilities... Please give comments/suggestions for which you think is best}
Dialogue: 0,0:01:35.13,0:01:40.47,Main Dialog,,0000,0000,0000,,Inside us all, heart lies foremost. {Inside us all, lies foremost, heart/Within everything, heart comes first/Heart heads all within}
Dialogue: 0,0:01:41.24,0:01:45.64,Main Dialog,,0000,0000,0000,,Heart is thy Lord, {/Everything is ruled by heart/All heeds heart}
Dialogue: 0,0:01:45.64,0:01:48.99,Main Dialog,,0000,0000,0000,,and thou art created from heart. {And from heart, (thou art) created/And from heart, (thou art) given form}
Dialogue: 0,0:01:49.73,0:01:59.27,Title2,,0000,0000,0000,,{\fade(2000,2000)}From Verse 1 of The Amberground Scriptures

Quarkboy sure put in a lot of :effort: there, so be sure to PM him your thoughts so that he can like… improve CR’s Letter Bee subs ever more, I guess…
While you’re there, tell him to tell CR to kick those jokers off Natsu no Arashi because they’re seem to have no idea on anything and produce a script that looks like 2 piles of shit mixed together.

Thanks.